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Intriguing
"Fascinating explanation on weaving and casting a spell. What gives most books from what I read a sense of magical realism is when said magic is explained. A good author who did this well was Paolini from the Eragon series (though I think he over did it to some extent). The introduction of what I assume is a grimoire falling into the hands of a love struck student (or perhaps love struck stalker ha!). Crochet a whole new cat had me smiling there. This ease of tension of using magic that affect attraction is normally negative but you made it seem light hearted. Perhaps prepping reasoning for the main character to use it on their lover despite what the letter concluded? Though this is just a letter to said love interest and we do not know much about the story. I can guess there will be some sort of short story arc explaining the events leading up to this letter? I am curious where you will go with this. I am not a fan of rating a story so prematurely since things can change. Such further as writing style, dialogue and so on makes it is hard to project where this story will go. It looks promising however and you seemed to put some thought and effort into this. I am not one for romance, yet the premise of magical realism seems intriguing to that type of audience. I hope you incorporate both effectively. Good work Mr. Hugh George Callaway, I look forward to more on this story."
Pregnant women to soap suds.
"Hugh - hi there. I know my user name says S.Kay, but my name is Sarah. 26 year old midwife from Melbourne, huge Star Trek fan, short story author (sorry did I say author? I meant novice) . Reading someone's work is like getting to know them so I figured it would be rude not to introduce myself. So that's me. Hi :) I saw your post on the Review Me Discussion page as I was scrolling through trying to find if mine ever uploaded (I'm very new to this Inkitt business and am the opposite of tech savvy) and I was intrigued to read your tale. So I did. And I was not at all disappointed. Your description of magic was bang on, from the pregnant women to the soap suds. Your letter was charming, and wise, and kind. Your writing was sincere and honest, every sentence, pause and musing felt purposeful and well timed. Not that I have any authority or professional accreditation to back me on this, but kudos to you on a job well done. And thank-you. It was nice to meet you - in a way."
Enjoyable
"Hi Hugh. I enjoyed reading this. Firstly, the subject matter intrigued me. I'm not a huge fantasy-reader but I do like that genre, especially in film, and I thought you wrote about the idea of magic itself in a beautiful way. I also really like epistolary stories. The idea of a character writing a letter is always interesting and you've used it to create a sense of intrigue and mystery (although by the end I hadn't really had all of my questions answered). Finally, I like that you created a personal tone, as if it really was someone writing in a sort of conversational style. I thought it did fluctuate at points though and some word choice felt really formal which jarred a little with the chatty tone in other parts. Overall I'm glad I followed the link to come read this. If you're interested in time travel/speculative fiction, it would be great if you could check out my novel 'Turning the Hourglass', even if you just want to read the first couple of chapters to get a feel for it: https://www.inkitt.com/stories/scifi/232732 Thanks!"
