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What is your opinion?
My opinion of the story so far
"I think for a prologue this is not a bad introduction, but for a first chapter it is very short and we don’t get a good introduction of the main characters personalities or their thought process. I think though if you try to make the chapters a bit longer and trying to add more personality in the characters it will make them less two dimensional and more life like. "
Layla
"This is a very unique book and a good escape out of the world and join unit a new one and hope you add another chapter because I'm already hooked on it so keep doing it and bye bye"
