What is your opinion?
Descriptive and Captivating
"I love good description, and you definitely delivered that in spades. You convey the tension in the air and the toll on the relationship so well in the first chapter and that last couple lines had me turning the page for more. I'll definitely be adding this to my reading list."
A catch from the start.
"This story grabs your attention quickly and it held me until its closing paragraph. Fred's character was very well drawn in particular, in that, little details were teased at a gradual pace over the course of the novel. I was supposed to read 10 chapters, I've read all of the book, which illustrates the captivating power of this author's writing style. I love the vivid use of description. One critique I have is that there were numerous spelling and technical mistakes in the draft, which once fixed, would make this story the perfect read in my mind. "
