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Love Eliot

"Not a happy ending but still a great story "

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Awwww...

"Great story, kept me on the edge of my seat.. so many clues, so ambiguous, so frustrating! I love the story though! ❤️"

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Love, Eliot

"This was a decent short story. It’s unfortunate that special friendships were lost, due to a misunderstanding. I thought that was petty; but, some things are better left the way they are. "

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Love, Eliot

"Interestingly amusing little romantic intrigue story and enjoyed the detective work through the characters! Thank You "

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Love, Eliot

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Very creative plot!

"Very creative story line, loved the unexpected twists but the end sort of fizzled. Never expected Drew was actually Eliot, and couldn't believe her two best friends would just abandon her like that. Very interesting story though, loads of intensity!"

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Keep you on edge

"Keep you on edge"

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Love, Eliot

"As always, anything written by Jane is well done. "

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Love, Eliot

"The book was great! Loved the mystery of it all and the discovery was very surprising. "

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Love, Eliot

"The plot was pretty unpredictable and that definitely got my attention. The suspense was captivating and I honestly liked the open ending. We don't always got that fairytale ending and that's fine. It made the story even more realistic."

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Couldn't put it down

"Great story. Emotional rollercoaster. Love the main character. "

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Very good story

"I expected Drew would be the Eloit1980 but please don't end the story like this I like both Drew and Josiah they both are good"

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The suspense...

"Truly well written! The suspense from chapter to chapter on who Eliot could be, really captivated me."

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Yas girl really loving this!!!

"This is so good I really love this story. I'm pretty sure I know who it is but who knows lol"

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Who is it

"At this point I think I know but it still could be anyone "

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Wow

"Amazing! please write the next one. I’m on my knee begging, please thanks so much love. "

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Love, Eliot

"this book is honestly one of the best i’ve ever read. i started reading this author’s books on wattpad first and recently downloaded Inkitt to read more of her work and i don’t regret my decision. she’s very talented and her work reflects it. this book is great for anyone who likes a sense of mystery paired with kink and submission. "

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Love eliot

" Ery good read can't wait to read more "

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Great read

"Thank you for always keeping me entertained!"

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Love,Eliot

"oh come one that cant be the end "

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