What is your opinion?
The legends
"It's amazing her work is amazing"
Nice book
"Very nice book. Enjoying it."
nice book
"Good so far. Enjoying readig it."
Good start
"I find myself liking the books whole idea, wanting to read more. What needs to happen though is serious editing. You are misusing words in multiple places. Other than that this story is great and I can't wait to read more. You should use this site to fix your writing, you won't have to do anything: https://www.grammarly.com/signin?utm_medium=internal&utm_source=signinHook"
Interesting first chapter!
"Not, too big, but not too long. Great for my reading style, it didn't tire me out!"
Promising
"This is not a bad story. It DID have a little trouble holding my attention. The tone comes across as if English is not your first language. That plus some grammatical errors tell me you really need an editor. Not a bad thing. We all need editors form time to time. The story is not bad either but it does need something. It's missing that hook that draws people in. You may want to ditch the First person view and go with a traditional narration.. I think the story has promise. But you are going to have to work for it."
