Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

please continue this story

"I am loving the progression of it, though the author can improve the writing"

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Don't remember

"It's a sweet light romance. A good read before bed. The author's grammar needs to be edited though. "

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Interesting.

"I like this book so far. Caroline is very well developed, and I look forward for a gradual progression of plot and characterization as the story goes on. Apart from some grammar and punctuation errors, this is pretty solid from what I've read."

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To love so pure

"The author has done a good job at starting the story. Since there are only 4 chapters there I could not rate the plot properly. Her writing style is clear and was engaging. I liked the way she has developed Caroline's character and I'd like to read more of the book. There were some minor spelling mistakes where upper cases were involved. But these could be easily corrected. Overall an interesting story. Keep up the good work!"

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