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Nice plot

"The book needs editing....overall a great read"

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Kidnapped By The Mafia Prince

"I love the mystery, each chapter leaves you wanting to know more! I can not put it down. Every writer whether it's a amateur or perfectionist has incorrect spelling. So what when your in the moment and your brain is going faster than your fingers you will encounter mistakes, and that is okay! I hope you continue to pursue your dream of writing novels because you have a fan here that can not wait to read more of your amazing creations. I love this novel and I am very sad to see that I am close to the end...😭"

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Love it

"Like it Will recommend it to anyone who loves to read Great story"

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Kidnapped By The Mafia Prince

"Another amazing story by the author 🥰🥰🤩🤩"

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Kidnapped by the Mafia prince

"The author really does know how to grab your attention without trying . it's quite an intriguing story..with grammar mistakes it's still a damn good book.well done and please do keep writing."

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Kidnapped by the mafia prince

"I really enjoy the plot. I love that the main female character has been through so much but still able to be strong and sensitive at the same time. She shows weakness every so often but is resilient."

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Kidnapped by the mafia prince

"I’m really enjoying this book. I’m glad Melanie started opening up. I agree with a part in the story where I wish he didn’t tell her for the first time he loved her during a fight."

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This book is so interesting , I love all the characters in it . I love the story . So full of drama , romantic , full of adventure and have many twists and turns . The story line is so good . I t keeps you up and you want to get to the end of the story

"I fell in love with with the story . Melanie really had a rough childhood. I want to know what happened to her starting from age 8 . How did she end up being in the hands of the couple that she thought were her parents, because they don’t care at all for her"

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Awesome

"Love this story. It is now one of my favorite stories "

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Kidnapped by the mafia Prince

"Great story from beginning to the end I absolutely recommend this story I loved it "

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Kidnapped by a mafia prince

"Great book! "

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Amazing story!

"I want a Lawrence! This story was one I could honestly barely put down. The character development is amazing! I don't just recommend, I demand that you read this story! It's worth it!"

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Love

"Lovely story Loved the whole plot "

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Loving it

"Definitely a great read, don’t worry about spelling unless you’re a English teacher! Cudos to the author on story line and plot, I enjoyed it looking forward to Reading more "

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🥰🥰🥰

"Awww!!! Loved 💕it so much!! Man Luciano pissed me off on how fast he turned on Melanie/Amelia! The whole time I was thinking how come you can’t recognise her, he was suppose to love her when they were younger!! I still was happy at the end!! Men are sooo blind sometimes!! He’s lucky she forgave him every time!!"

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This story is so sweet and heartwarming.

"I love this story so much. "

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Kiddnapped by the mafia prince

"Spelling Mabe a friend or sibling Bc its my first time on the app and the first book that caught my attention"

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Awesome

"Great job, keep doing what you doing. "

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Love it!

"Amazing story, love the characters so much, they are all so unique. Different from others stories that I have read. I’ve read so many books and this one has stood out to me so so much. I’ve read it so many times and never get tired of it. "

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Great Story

"This story is really great the plot is intriguing and it keeps you interested. My only problem is the spelling and grammar other than that great storyline."

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