What is your opinion?
Loved it!
"The storyline behind this novel is something new and original. It kept me intrigued the whole time I was reading and kept me wanting more. The author has clearly put a lot of thought into the details of the story and uses a lot of descriptive vocabulary which makes it easy and fun to visualize. Also enjoy the addition of humor in the story as it makes it just that more enjoyable and fun to read. Looking forward to reading more from Shanice!"
Intriguing idea
"This forms the beginning of an original and interesting idea. The plot has not yet been fully developed but it is off to a good start. I don't know where Shanice Bannis is taking the story but the characters and story line have potential. It needs a thorough edit to correct the grammar, spelling, general expression and use of language. It can get a little confusing at times, especially the transitions between the dream and reality (although that may be what you intended.) Good luck with completing this interesting story."
