Inkitt
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Thrilling

"If you're looking for a different type of book this is for you. Loved it and even though it sounds like the sequel doesn't follow this book per say hoping it will come back because I want to know what happens."

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Her last hope

"Liked the way the uathor incorporates the sense of love and hate in the book."

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Luna

"Nice twist😏"

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Her

"Good read interesting so I grossed forgottitle"

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Her last hope

"Very good story. Ur plot twists r very captivating. Plz 4 the love of all that is holy finish this mind capturing book 😎😎😎"

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Love the book

"The last part is a little confusing but it’s a really good book"

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Review

"Everything happened so quickly I’m still trying to figure it out but it’s a good story "

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Her last hope

"Pls complete the story fast"

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Painfully good

"A lot of twists and turns, and I feel so sorry for Lake/Firefly"

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Miss

"Hello hello hello "

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Love it

"I like the plot and how the story progressed would recommend 😍 ❤️ "

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Her Last Hope

"While grammar, spelling, punctuation are all important functions within a properly written piece of work, I like to highlight plot, character or characters and the development of a cohesive storyline. The author has the opportunity to edit once those matters are in place. The author has established within the first chapter the beginning of the plot and the characters attached to the storyline, albeit not all the main characters as shown in the prelude. I find her story highly interesting and am looking forward to reading her work as she progresses. I hope she continues and does not give up as I have seen many authors do. "

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Slow start

"I found it a bit slow for the first half of the book and nearly stopped reading, but it all came together in the end. A very interesting plot in this story."

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My thoughts

"I'm not sure how to expresS my view on this story. One thing I can say is that it is definitely unique. I'm not sure is I'm satisfied or dissatisfied. Still nice job author. Far from cliché, which is just as welcomed. Thank you."

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Awesome

"It's a great book so far"

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Great

"It’s great. Very entertaining had me up to four in the morning "

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Don't remember

"Good story line. Like that there is no pron included in the story. That ruins way too many books and story lines. "

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Great story

"Good so far, looking forward to finding out the prophecy. "

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