What is your opinion?
Good !
"This is really good ! I love it. "
Intriguing
"Your writing style flows so beautifully and so smoothly that it mesmerizes and captivates the reader. Your vivid use of rhythmic description kept me enthralled and reading on. You had me from the very first sentence, which was really quite impressive. I love how you have kept the first chapter mysterious enough to keep me wanting more. but have given me enough to keep me engaged with the story to come, I cannot wait to find out what the plot line has in store for Scott as the story develops."
Amazing start
"I am in love with the first chapter of this book. The characters voice really transfers incredibly well. You immediately find yourself egging him on and rooting for him. There are some minor punctuation errors but nothing too concerning. Defiantly give this book some love and read it. -alice"
Great Start
"Only two chapters in, the author has already established an intriguing and unique premise with the central conflict of the story clearly laid out. The main character is well drawn, despite the brevity of the plot at this point, And, the writer's use of language including imagery, dialog and metaphor are all solidly entertaining. This is a strong start to an interesting theme and concept. The reader is already drawn into the story and looking for more."
