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Snow

"A well written poem about snow. The description captures all sides of the snow."

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o.O

"I like the way you put exaclty the same number of lines for good and evil, and the paradox you kept putting forward. Was a good idea to introduce all of that by talking about a double-sided blade"

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Nice work!

"This was a quick read but worth it. I loved the writer's portrayal of the dual aspects of snow: good and evil, softness and ill intent, and that beauty can be deceiving. It's like the softness of a snowfall versus how harsh or dangerous an ice storm can be. I feel as though certain lines of the poem could use some added punch or stronger word-choice at the beginning, but the end is particularly good with some great lines. I will be sure to read more of this writer's work."

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