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The Experimental Girl .

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Summary

"I am the last of my family. I am a monster." “I hadn’t always lived this life, I was “normal” once. I had a loving family. A mother, father, younger sister and older brother. They caught my parents and sister, keeping them alive if I did as I am told. So that is the day I became an assassin.” Evangelina, a young girl who spends every day fighting to keep her family alive. But when things take a turn for the worse Eva must use all the help she can get because nothing is as it seems. Can Eva really trust the only person she calls a friend?

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Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Prologue.

I glared at the computer screen, willing the words to just appear on the screen as my mind goes completely blank.

“Come on, it can’t be that hard to write a few paragraphs.”

I groaned and stared up at the ceiling as I flopped back into my chair. I could hear the rest of the family moving around upstairs. Sighing I looked at the computer screen and slowly started to type then I heard noises outside, I froze and frowned listening for any more noises, but there was nothing, shrugging I continued with my work then I listened to the sounds again.

“What is that?”

I turned in my chair and looked at the front door in confusion; I curiously get out of the chair and made my way to the front door. Suddenly there was a loud bang, and I shielded myself as the door came in, and then all hell broke loose.

I screamed as two men grabbed me, I struggled frantically against their hold. I could hear mom and dad shouting and Maya screaming as more men ran upstairs.

“There are four here sir.”

I couldn’t see who they were talking to.

“Good, sedate then bring them out to the van.”

Suddenly there was a sharp pain in my neck which caused me to cry out. My body started to feel heavy, my struggles became weak as I was lifted and carried outside, and I closed my eyes as I drifted to sleep.

Not knowing if I would see my family again.

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