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Wind

"So short but well written about wind. Describing it in newer ways."

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No Complexity Necessary

"Simple, to the point, yet evocative, this describes wind in a way that everyone is familiar with, but the brevity gives it a lot of punch. I can so easily picture this poem being overlaid on a photo of autumn leaves blowing through the air. Great work!"

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Calming

"Very pretty! A bit more rythme and it would be perfect."

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