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Great! Looking forward to the next Sequel!

"Like this story so far, it has lots of lessons to teach us practically in life and in love. It just tells us that nobody’s perfect, we all commit mistakes but we should always learn the consequences if we did not rectify all of those, just like Nave’s decisions. I love Mark for Nave, hope they’ve got a great ending at the next sequel. Thank you Dear Author for a lovely teen story! It’s great!❤️ Hoping to see the next one! 🥰"

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Class

"Wish it was more to read"

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Beautiful story 🥰

"Very well written... Interesting story 👍 Enjoyed reading it "

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Immaculate Deceivers

"Excellent. Brings the point across that little lies end up being big lies and can have terrible results"

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Immaculate Deceivers

"We needed Nave and Mark,spiced with some pregnant Nave!but otherwise well written,nice and interesting read."

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Immaculate deceivers

"I like the book very much. I liked the plot and the developement of the characters. I felt sad that Mark didan't stay with Nave in the end but they both need to grow up before they start dating. Congratulations author! "

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Sonething

"I love this book 📕 🥳🥳🥳"

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Immaculate Decivers

"I absolutely loved this book and I couldn't put it down once I started reading it. "

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Immaculate deceivers

"Loved the story, can't wait to read the next book 🖤"

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Immaculate Deceivers

"This is certainly a good coming-of-age story. This would be great for teens and young adults. You've done a great job of bringing everything together, while teaching good morals.🌹"

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Really good

"Not the usual type of book I’d read but I really like this author! The cheating theme was a bit personal for me as I’ve been hurt badly in the past, but the characters interactions with each other, and being able to read multiple perspectives made it enjoyable to read. I’m about to read the sequel!"

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Miss

"Very interesting book"

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Different

"Something different"

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Immaculate deceivers

"I love the way this story bring the tears into my eyes"

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so good

"loved the plot and the characters! the different POVs were really good to show all the emotions throughout the book"

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Immaculate Deceivers

"This book is one of the best on Inkitt, even thigh it is lesser known. I have already recommended it to Manny of my friends, and we all love it. The plot twists are very unexpected, and I like that the main characters don't get everything they want, especial Naveah ending up without any boys. Truly a very good book. Hopefully, thesequel is just as good.😊"

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Love

"No words to describe this beautiful book and already reading the sequel and im at lost for words "

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Love

"I love this book...... "

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Good

"Good story so far"

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Great read

"Loved the story"

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