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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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The rejected angel

"Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Great

"Wonderful real"

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Love it when is the next update please can't wait

"I really love this book so far i would recommend it with a smile on my face. Yes there is a few grammar mistakes but still love it😍"

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Bushit

"I hate these dumb reviews "

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rejected angel

"nice story"

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So good!

"I cant stop reading it. The twists and turns keep getting me"

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Idk

"Great really nice "

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Hated

"I m not as happy as I should be . This book has ne confused. "

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Kind of confusing

"The flow of the novel is kind of confusing. Some parts a re more developed than others, but that's to be expected. It's the transitions that don't make much sense. "

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Interesting

"Goodddddddddd"

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A bit confusing

"Nice one upto now"

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Confusing but goid

"It's ok so far"

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Good start

"Nice job! There are some grammar mistakes. Your prolog was a little bit confusing. I didn't understand why there was a list of all of the characters. I would like to ask why you but a bunch of slashes sometimes in between paragraphs. Your blurb was a bit confusing as well. Your grammar could use a lot of help so make sure to proofread all of your work before you submit it. Overall I think you have a good start. Good luck with publishing your book!"

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Odd

"Confusing storyline. "

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Good

"Good ...there is a bit of flaw in the male character..plus the there are a lot of unanswered questions like how did Ryan come to rescue her when her aunt attacked. There is no justification for her aunt's hate towards her. I felt the base of the story is not so strong. I apologize if my comments came out harsh."

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Not worth reading

"The story makes no sense and has no flow. It just throws out a bunch of random stuff. "

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Confusing

"Not worth reading, just a bunch of rambling, story is confusing and lacks detail"

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