Avani

A kid (not a teen yet) attempting to write.

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Great Job!

I think that your story is really good. There are some very minor grammar issues but that is ok. Also, I liked your old title better (An Altered Fairy Tale). Keep it up!

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Lovely!

That was beautiful! I wish you wrote a little more about Kevin but you can do that in the next chapter. I love how you showed how much the sisters loved each other. I felt like the pace of the story was a bit too fast, You have a great start and I am interested to hear from you more. Good luck!

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Keep it up!

I think that your writing style is amazing. There are a few errors in conventions but that is fine. I really liked how you had lots of descriptive words.

All in all, I think that this poem is really sweet and thoughtful. Keep writing!

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Good Book

My friend told me to write this exact review so I am!

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Wow.

I love your writing! The way that you wrote things really helped t0 set a picture in my mind. I think that you can work on your grammar a little bit ( I saw a lowercase i). I love your book and it has a great start! I am looking forward to reading more.

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Amazing!

That was really good. The thing I liked the most is that you described the character several times throughout the book. It helps to spread the knowledge. I encourage you to keep on doing that. I love how you use descriptive words when describing something. Your grammar could use a little improvement but I wasn't really worried about that because you can always fix your work later. The plot is also very nice. I can really tell that the theme is romance. Overall I say that you did a great job. Keep up the good work! Good luck!

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Good start

Nice job! There are some grammar mistakes. Your prolog was a little bit confusing. I didn't understand why there was a list of all of the characters. I would like to ask why you but a bunch of slashes sometimes in between paragraphs. Your blurb was a bit confusing as well. Your grammar could use a lot of help so make sure to proofread all of your work before you submit it. Overall I think you have a good start. Good luck with publishing your book!

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