Avani

Good Book

My friend told me to write this exact review so I am!

Wow.

I love your writing! The way that you wrote things really helped t0 set a picture in my mind. I think that you can work on your grammar a little bit ( I saw a lowercase i). I love your book and it has a great start! I am looking forward to reading more.

Amazing!

That was really good. The thing I liked the most is that you described the character several times throughout the book. It helps to spread the knowledge. I encourage you to keep on doing that. I love how you use descriptive words when describing something. Your grammar could use a little improvement but I wasn't really worried about that because you can always fix your work later. The plot is also very nice. I can really tell that the theme is romance. Overall I say that you did a great job. Keep up the good work! Good luck!

Good start

Nice job! There are some grammar mistakes. Your prolog was a little bit confusing. I didn't understand why there was a list of all of the characters. I would like to ask why you but a bunch of slashes sometimes in between paragraphs. Your blurb was a bit confusing as well. Your grammar could use a lot of help so make sure to proofread all of your work before you submit it. Overall I think you have a good start. Good luck with publishing your book!