What is your opinion?
Feral Lust
"Excellent! Thank you-looking forward to book 2"
Loved'it
"Awesome book l, well done 👍👏🤗"
Feral Lust
"The characters were really well developed, I loved the little hints, it was very well written, although I feel it was a bit rushed towards the end. "
Feral Lust
"I can't wait for book 2 this was great."
Feral Lust
"Awesome book. Keep writing!!"
❤️ love this!
"Im like 😱. I want to see how this end!!! "
Feral Lust
"What!?! The end!?! Awesome story. Now, for the conclusion."
Feral Lust
"Wow, this book is much better than expected! Plot is great! Author really sets up characters for every part they play. "
Feral Lust
"I can NOT wait for book 2! This story had me reading nonstop from the first paragraph! ❤️"
Amazing read looking forward to book 2
"Very well written ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤"
Wow
"very nise"
I don't know why people don't like it.
"First things first, your cover blew me away. I mean, it's so dark and if I saw this in the bookshop I would immediately pick it up. I also really enjoyed your plot. Yes, it's written in 3 pov., but I think that makes the story different. I also like your character development and the story itself. You have some grammar mistakes, but who hasn't? I mean, you can't excpect it to be perfect from the starts. Great work!"
Fetal lust
"Interesting read, can't wait to see the plot unfold in book 2. Only noticed that most times when you're using advanced words, it doesn't quite fit the tone of the book a bit superficial. Otherwise great story. "
Feral lust
"Nicely written"
Cliffhanger
"Need to read the second book"
Typical Werewolf
"My biggest problem is with the plot of this story. I've read way too many cringe-y, bad werewolf stories in my past so going in, I really wanted to be wowed by the originality of this story. However, while the writing is fine (though sometimes out of place like when transitioning from one scene to another you blatantly told us what Celeste was doing when we were with Elliott), the plot seems to be like any other werewolf story. The pacing is slightly faster than I'd like, with many characters to keep track of from two POVs. Overall, I think the writing skills here could be put into better use into a genre that's not saturated with notoriously bad books. Of course, I do know that some people just like the genre and cliches."
A Refreshing Lycan Experience
"This was an engaging tale that kept me intrigued throughout the entirety of the story. The points of view flowed smoothly back and forth (the paragraphs only need to be separated better, in my own opinion, to keep from confusing the reader) and their continuity kept up with the pace of the chapter. There were punctuation and grammar issues that could be resolved with editing tools or an editor, though they did not overly detract from the story. Good, solid writing overall that really brought forth the lycan experience. Well done!"
A good start
"The first chapter is really great, and the dynamic narration continues through into the following chapters, with the parallel stories of Celeste and Elliot. There are some grammar / punctuation errors...which can be fixed easily when you go back to the story to edit."
I like it but...
"I think the flow of the story is a bit rough. Some transitions are hard to keep up with and require attention to help the fluidity of Elliot and Celeste's webbed romantic en-devours, Currently, in my opinion the story reads slowly despite the fast flow of the plot. Speaking of the plot, It didn't really scream out when compared to some others I've read. Don't get me wrong, the plot is still solid, just probably in the low 30's of the 50+ werewolf novels I've come across. Needs a little more originality. The authors attempt on this writing style needs a little work, but it is an interesting style to play with. I love the character development, however I do feel it could have been a bit ... more. There were a few grammatical and punctual errors, but we're only human, right. Now I don't mean for this to hurt the authors feelings. Everyone has their preferences, this one just slipped a little under mine. Don't give up yet, It has potential. Hope this helped and best of luck with future revision and edits."
