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Beautiful work of art and imagination

"The book takes you out of this world into a magical world and gives the reader a lot to imagine and fantasise about"

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Wow

"Such an emotional story. I got so into it I was actually feeling all the things she goes thru. I am so rooting for them. The writing style is purely romantic with all the descriptions and the symbolism. Please update. Great job!"

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Beyond the bright stars

"Wow this was infinity and beyond.The fantastic story of pure light and a joy to read .iv read alot of good storys ,but this surpasses them all thank for sharing this ."

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Beyond the bright stars

"LOVE! LOVE! LOVED it ☺️ haven't enjoyed a story this much in along time. i really hope this book gets published💖💖💖💖💖"

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Heartfelt

"The story touches your heart from the very beginning. It fills you with happiness, love, anger, hate and many more emotions. The author has a knack for carving out the emotions. It s a beautiful tale of 'and they lived happily ever after'. "

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It's magical, kept me in suspense, made me cry and laugh

"I love everything about the book, just that some parts left me confused like what becomes of ONYX"

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Beyond the Bright Starts

"Amazing. Waited in suspense for every chapter. You've outdone yourself. I loved this book so much!!!❤❤❤ And now I'm sad that it's over. "

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Don't tell me that's the end... it's lovely will they be another. Love this book

"I am in love with this book , loved the first as much as the second "

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I love it

"I love it because it is so good. It makes you want to read more of the story. "

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Beyond the bright stars

"Beyond The Deep Water was excellent. I liked it so much, I went on to read Beyond the Bright Stars. You did excellent work here. Be proud of yourself. Out of everything I've read on inkitt, and I've read a lot. This is my absolute favorite! Well done!! Waiting for the next chapter."

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Beyond the star filled sky

"I have fallen in love with this series, with its characters, and have felt every tear shed, and heartbreak. Jts worth the read and the soon to come reread"

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Beyond the stars

"When is this torture for this poor girl going to end?"

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Great book

"Really like this story. Well thought out plot and unexpected twists. Highly recommend giving this book a shot! :)"

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Yuliy Jaeger

"I love you, this book is so beautiful the writing is so nostalgic yet un-sedating because all i wanna do is keep reading. Its overpowering and emotional i love it 💕 with no doubt everyone should read this book, every chapter is fulfilling to such an intimate and respectful love yet again i repeat myself i love it. For the writing i have no complaints and i would say ages 18 and older will love this book and come to understand to the emitting feelings of each character the writer is trying to portray. "

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UPDATE

"Please please please please please please please please please please update"

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Great story!

"I love your stories and your writing! Can't wait for you to update!!"

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Please updateplease I cannot rest easy until I find out the outcome of such a fantastic story that you compiled for all of us to enjoy 💘

"Please update loved everything about the stories 💘💘💘"

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More I need more!

"I love all of it please dont let it end im obsessed with this story and i cant get enough!!!!"

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Beyond the stars

"Loveeeeee...can’t wait to finish it!!"

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😘😘😍😘😍

"Love the story it so amazing I just hope that Camille can get eternal life to being with Axl😊"

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