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Ouch, My Heart

"Wow, this sort of breaks my heart. I think this is a good idea. Death is a natural, but painful thing. This is a good way to get your emotions out without all of the criticism and concern from our family. I like it. This can be a pretty neat story if you decide to make it into one. I'll support you. This is a good idea. I'd keep working on it."

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