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Great story

"OMG love this book is when will the sequel be released 😍😍❓"

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Great story

"OMG love this book is when will the sequel be released 😍😍❓"

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Amazing book

"The thame is different in every good way. It's really fit in my imagination as I can see and feel everything which is written in excellent way. The author has very good way in plotting every scene in outstanding chronological order. It's an amazing book. YOU MUST read it."

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Taltos

"Your method of writing is impeccable I am hooked and can't stop reading my grave to your elbow dear"

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The Fire That Froze.

"Tragic but gretz did murder 3 women. Will there be a book 2? I only feel bad for her son as he is innocent."

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Strange yet extremely interesting

"This is my first time reading something like this. I don't dislike anything, the writer create a wonderful plot and everything was fine. Wish there was a part two. Would love to find out what happened afterwards. I hope you would write a follow up for it or a different story."

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The fire that froze

"Wow!! It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Just.....WOW🙉"

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Hauntingly beautiful

"This gave me chills. the writing, the plot, the tears. It all was a hauntingly beautiful story. Warning for graphic descriptions in the book though. "

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So great❤️

"Leaving a review on this story is worth it •An amazing story •A great work Loving it😊"

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Just stupendofantfabulous

"Just wow!! "

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The fire that froze

"It has aperfect setting.mongolia.also it makes you feel the emotions of the woman that desperately needs a kid"

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The fire tht froze

"I wish if merse left his clan nd went with gezte nd if still loved her soo much nd still wanted her"

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Its an interesting story, a novel with a twist

"This novel will have your mind spinning as a pregnant woman is fighting to keep the child in her womb from dying, she is willing to risk anything to keep it. Please read this story it is truly an amazing story"

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10/10

"I fell in love with the main character; you smile with her, you cry with her, you even love with her. The writing is smooth and easy to understand and it's honestly just a beautiful work all around."

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Amazing concept

"Beautifully terrifing. The writing style was good and the concept was great too"

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Butcbjnkin bibivyvugu

"Loving the storyline, great plot, perfectly believable characters,want to keep reading"

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Great read

"You're a very fantastic storyteller I was pulled in immediately. I hope to read more of what you write, your voice and tone are unique. Quite honestly this was a splendid story. I loved your writing style a lot. I really liked the story, I thought the ending was well thought out, though a bit rushed, but honestly the story was great. I'm glad to have read this story. A Great Read"

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Superb

"I've always been interested in reading stories set in Mongolia and this story took to over to the deserts, the wilderness, land of horses, wandering herdsmen, magic, supernatural elements, love, destiny, heartbreak and more. The dialogues were beautifully crafted. It was a journey of a young woman who marries the head of a tribe and is expected to give birth to his heirs. The extreme lengths to which she goes through to keep the baby in her womb alive shows her commitment towards her husband left me wondering was it all worth it? In that situation, she had almost no choice and it was painful for her. I had to read the story till the end to satisfy myself. I would like to highly recommend this story to all who love romance and fantasy."

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Incredible.

"This story was just amazing. I can't say anything more! So dark, so mature, so heartbreaking...I have one question: What happened to them both? Specifically, I mean. The end is ambiguous and I really admire that, but still I'd to know what happened to the baby."

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Stellar writing

"I am author Dapharoah69 on here and I wrote "The Law of Beasts." This story is very good writing. I was already reading this and reserved the last copy because its a great read and out of the few books I read on here, this one is magnetic and inspiring. Kudos to you FreydisMM"

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