What is your opinion?
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Review
"You have written quite the story here. Each line carried the banal helplessness of their quarantine, set up well with a quickly relatable character. But it was at the email where this piece shone. Each line there was a gut punch, full of the emotion that was vacant in the previous lines. A great piece. Now for advice. I believe that, while amazing, the final piece with the email could have benefited from a bit more attention on the first one (before Mark's). I believe that if emotion started to seep into her reactions there more than there was, it could make the "dam breaking" moment afterwards all the more emotional. I wish you best of luck in your future projects, Riposte"
