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"Well, this was sad through out; but a kind of...bearable sad? Real, raw grief that connected me to the story, that is. I loved seeing how they slowly came together as a couple in the flashbacks; then seeing the 'present' where Dorian is just hurting so much and not coping well at all. Ow, just ow. I've never read of an Adaar who had a crush on Solas before, but I can really see it happening. That ending, while sad, was wonderful. Just the right kind of thing for this story."

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