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forgive and love

"i love this beautiful story, i learnt how to live life by forgiving people even who hurt you and love those whom you hatred badly, also the concept how whites and blacks finally mixed up together after a massive mess"

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Emotional

"Good story! It’s very emotional and deep. "

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AMAZING!

"just read the first chapter... I love it. Can't wait to read the whole book. You're really talented."

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I don't even have words

"i just read the prologue of this story and i'm already hooked. This story will always be my favorite story"

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A Great Book!

"I am a historical fiction reader as well as many other genres. You book stood out amongst those genres and made me want to read more. This is a good story and the only thing I could recommend to change or edit is if you use a free grammar resource such as Grammarly."

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Great story

"A very creative story from a creative mind. Great story. Would gladly recommend it to all readers"

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The story told

"I am enamored with the story in it of itself. A great book will be successful by it's story. That is what compels a reader, and reading just the first few chapters I did enjoy it. Now, I am very peculiar with writing wise, I am no expert, but in regards to the writing it is a bit fast paced and lack details in scenery, emotions, and setting. But other than that, great book, keep enhancing your skills and keep writing!"

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Nice

"Seems good to me "

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