What is your opinion?
Phenomenal
"This story is more than words can describe. The descriptive and detailed words place you in a room filled with emotion and thoughts. It feels as if you are sitting watching the entire story roll along in front of you. Characters were developed through their dialogue, which was skillfully done. The dialogue gave you a clear idea of each character's personality which helped the development of the story run smoothly. The main character's inner thoughts built up and stabilized the story structure. They helped explain the flow of events, and worked as the base for the plot. The story was beautiful, I loved every part of it. The way Ellie expressed her thoughts within the story gave it such meaning. The choice of vocabulary was also impressive, great job, helped express true meaning more effectively. This is that kind of story that makes you feel motivated and want to get up and do something after reading it. I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future."
Great Short Story
"Great job! Love how the character grew from her inner thoughts to express them into that speech at the end. Excellent job. Mina the only thing I would suggest is to separate the speaking parts of each individual speaking. It will allow the story to flow easier. Other than that it was an excellent short story with a great story line and character development. Keep up the good work!"
