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Coming Home

"Amazing story❤️"

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Very sweet and romantic❤️‍🔥

"Absolutely beautiful 🥰"

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Coming home

" I loved this story! "

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Coming home

"Just a beautiful story. Just the right amount of Drama. I loved you’re story 😍🥰❤️"

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Coming home

"I had mixed emotions while reading this book which I liked cause we can't always predict how a story ends. Thank you for giving his version cause I was not happy with him when the one night stand opened the door😳 "

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What a journey...

"First, let me say that I have been stuck to this story since the first sentence...There we're times that I cried and I must say that during the last few pages(before Adrian's POV), I couldn't even finish my breakfast...it just wouldn't go down...so broken but I do get it, even if you had not added the bonus chapter. Of course people have different views but I follow the writer and hope for the best and that's exactly what happened...thanks so much for going with your gut! It was well written with enough drama to keep it going. Again, thank you!"

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Coming Home

"This novel makes it so worth my while reading it. I love it! 👍👍"

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Adrian & Caroline

"Good plot to the story, although story does skip throughout. Because of this, I felt the story read rushed. Use of YOU a lot, instead of I/me. It confuses which person form the story is narrating."

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Loved it....

"Great story line. Awesome writing. Start to finish could not quit reading. Thank you."

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Lovely

"Thank you I love it "

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Coming home

"I loved it."

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Absolutely loved it!

"I enjoyed this story way too much! Even though my view of how Adrian’s perspective lined up exactly like the bonus chapter did, I thought it was a perfect addition to include in the story. I just about cried at the last chapter, incorporating the lake was just PERFECT! Thank you for an amazing story!"

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Dream

"This was a fast moving story 5hat was wonderful, alot of ups and downs . Tears and smiles. Loved it"

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Awesome story thank you

"Just loved the story thank you "

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Coming home

"Liked the story. The mis use of pronouns was crazy. I did understood her forgiving him so quickly. From his point of view was also good."

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Coming home

"Definitely love and enjoy reading your story.."

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Coming Home

"Although the story was wonderful it was very disconcerting when I/You and my/your got mixed up changing the perspective of the narrator. Otherwise well worth reading "

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So sweet

"Such a lovely story, I love the wedding such a great way to remember her dad"

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Coming Home

"Amazing story! Love it ❤️"

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Coming home

"This was an amazing book. Thank you so much so allowing us to live and experience the life of the characters in this book. It was truly amazing 🤗🤍"

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