What is your opinion?
Taken
"Liked it!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "
Taken
"Dang I was expecting more. I love it! This story kept me entertained."
,
"An interesting piece of work. I suggest you join NovelStar’s writing competition this April."
Annoyed
"56566666666666"
Review
"Pretty good read"
Mksd
"Pace is very fast "
Love it so far no problem here
"Very nice story so far"
Taken
"It should be longer we've all waited so long for the next chapter of this story and it was cut so short and there wasn't enough detail because right when it starts to get interesting the chapter cut off"
Taken
"I’m liking the book so far. It has a great start and I’m so looking forward to more chapters in the future. Please continue to write and update whenever you can."
Good Story
"I love it..... continue with this book"
Taken
"Update please."
I'd like to see this story edited and rewritten
"You've got a good idea, but I couldn't go past the first chapter. It seemed like the writer was struggling to make sense of some action in what the characters were doing and as if it was pulled from another story and fit in the wrong puzzle piece spot. Perhaps getting help with editing, sentence structure and filling out the characters more would help this story a great deal. It currently needs help and I know with help it could be so much better. Good luck!"
