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I write this with tears shimmering in my eyes

I have just finished the story and my eyes are still full of happy tears.
This has been one of the best stories I have read on Inkitt.
I cannot express in words how strongly I feel and I don't think there are words good enough to describe how truly great this story is.
Thank you for the happy ending my heart and soul has been searching for.
Positively Breathtaking!

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Fantastic Story!

I loved the story. I've not seen many gay nor lesbian werewolf stories and this was well thought out and done right.

If I may suggest though, it seems maybe English is not your first language? I don't know if they have Editors on Inkitt or not, but it would help to have someone proof read the story for you. Also, try reading the story out loud to yourself, first once and then a second time.

If the sentence doesn't flow correctly try using different words or see if you left out a word.

Good luck!
Happy Writing!

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I'd like to see this story edited and rewritten

You've got a good idea, but I couldn't go past the first chapter. It seemed like the writer was struggling to make sense of some action in what the characters were doing and as if it was pulled from another story and fit in the wrong puzzle piece spot.
Perhaps getting help with editing, sentence structure and filling out the characters more would help this story a great deal.
It currently needs help and I know with help it could be so much better.
Good luck!

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Missing words & Editor Suggestion

The story has an okay plot; one that has been written many times over. It was very hard to get into even the second chapter. What I'm finding is that perhaps English is not the writer's first language. Getting an Editor to help would be a great help for you.
Try to read your chapters out loud to yourself. If the sentence isn't making sense or you stumble a bit it is the same way for your readers. Get help from family or friend; allow them to read your stories before publishing.
There are many missing words in each paragraph. I scanned a second story and it was much the same.
I see that you have many short stories complete and I do hope some day you will go back and rewrite them clearing up the technical end of them. Good luck to you!

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2 years and no new chapters

I started reading this book a while back; about a year ago. One of my biggest pet peeves with writers in venues like this is unfinished stories. There are hundreds of unfinished stories on Inkitt and other venues. I had hope this writer would come back and finish. Had I read the reviews first and noticed the dates on the comments I wouldn't have read it.
For whatever reason this wasn't finished it is sad. I've come across many writers that just don't finished stories and yet start up new stories so their whole wall is filled with unfinished and ongoing stories.
My advice to any writer reading this; don't go in that direction. If you cannot finish a story do not start another. Get help; find the block and figure out why.
This story could have been wonderful.

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Young in thought

It was a nice, pleasant story. I was almost too nice with a bit of the Pollyanna feel too it. I would have liked to see more detail and the characters fleshed out a bit more. For a beginning, first story it was okay.
As other's have said there were some errors, but I'm sure with help editing and reading the story out loud to yourself a few times you'll nips those pretty quickly next time.
I also would like to mention that there wasn't much of a plot. Girl runs from home and meets a boy and they hook up. No twist; no cliff hanger just smooth sailing. Brody wasn't much of a big deal or threat. I would have liked to have seen Asuna have more of a backbone and do more before making the choice she had. Asuna did have family in a different pack; she could have gone there and learned more about her family for a while before jumping in with Tony's pack.
Good luck!

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Interesting with a pull towards a second story

Although there were errors and lots of mistakes on grammar, there and their as well as cent and scent and a few others, the story was good.
I would have liked it to explain and tell what happened to the wolves that went rogue and why they started to attack a town/village. There was no explanation.
Also, why the weird feelings about Morgan? The characters could have been fleshed out a bit more and the story never explained to the others in her pack about what happened at her old home/pack.

The plot was good even if a few holes. I'd like to see there be a follow up.

Overall, well done!

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Only got to the 3rd Chapter; not into spank material

It is obvious that English is not the writer's first language. There are many clipped sentences and words left out as well as misuse of words.
For spank material I'm sure people love it, but as for overall plot that's a negative.
If you actually talk about the characters, fill out the story more and give it a plot it would work and do wonders.

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Curl up in your comfy chair for a good read

Overall great story though there were several chapters where name jumping happened. It left you ask,"Who is that?" and "Where'd that name come from." Easy enough to fix. What stuck out the most the innocence of the female lead character and the cliff hanger ending. I suggest reading it and following up with this writer's other stories as I will do.
I hope there will be a book 2 to this story if not an ending added.
I don't usually do a review on an unfinished story, but it kept me going and wanting to know what happened. Well done.

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Takes you with the characters on their journey; amazingly well done!

I have to honestly say I got so caught up in reading PartWolf's stories that I've forgotten to review many of them. That is how awesome the stories are. Hands down when a writer has me so wrapped up in their stories that I laugh and cry along with the characters and don't want to stop ready them...their just isn't words to express how great they are. I love when a story takes me with it on it's journey. When the write can capture my mind and imagination and show me the pictures with words as well as make me feel every second of those characters lives it just amazes me.

If I could give top awards for best writer PartWolf would get one!

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Dangerously close to pedofile

I read through "Naming Ceremony" and couldn't go on in good conscious. I know this is fiction, but it is wrong in the male taking the 2 month old baby to bed with him. How did she know she was two? Why didn't he search through the car for items for the baby or possible identification of the mother to know the baby's last name. Didn't call emergency services to report it either.
It's just very creepy him being an adult . The fact that the story is basically told as if the writer is speaking stilted...broken and it just doesn't make any sense..
Please I urger writes to read your stories out loud to yourself and as well as a few friends. See if the sentence makes sense to you. Do the words flow properly as if spoken by an English person.
Your stories are being marketed and seen by an English speaking crowd. Try to google some of the words and see their meanings before entering them in a sentence. Does it make sense to use that word?

Lastly whether humans found the baby or wolves, instinct is making sure the baby is okay, fed, warm and finding her family if she has any relatives still alive and or family to watch over her. It is not okay in many cultures to take an infant or underage female to bed, even if just sleeping next to them, specially when that female if your infant mate. Very taboo.

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Some suggestions if I may?

I'm really not sure where to begin with this story. I could not finish it after "he slipped his membrane in" or was it inside. I really did try to over look all of the errors and muddle through the rest of the story, but the more I read the more I felt like it was being written by a 12 year old boy trying to pretend like he is his much older brother trying and failing to have sex.
This is why Inkitt needs to change things up. If they are going to allow younger writers then they should provide them with accurate proof reading help. A story that causes a reader to stumble and go what the heck? Is not good no matter if they try to and fail at throwing a few sexy situations in there.
What I suggest to many writers is to read a story out loud, several times. See if your sentences flow and make sense. Ask family or friends to read your story and help you proof read. If English is not your first language and you are writing in English ask for help in that situation as well. This story is good, however the style and technical writing skills are not. I hope that you've continued to write and that you've also taken some constructive criticism and worked on the technical issues. Good luck in future!

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Grammar and Punctuation, Proof

This is something you cannot do without when writing a story. Most people would rip you to shreds. Punctuation is very important as well as grammar. Proof reading and getting help to proof read will be your biggest help. I often encourage people to read a page out loud. Does it sound right to you? Does it flow well? Or are you stumbling? If you stumble your reader is going to be as well, but more so.
"Welcome to the world of writing.," Professor Engleton said as he passed around instructional booklets.
You know that someone is speaking and that it isn't a thought. You can also tell WHO is speaking. This is just a generic and simple example.

You've got good ideas, but I barely got through the 1st chapter before I was shaking my head.
Good luck to you.

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Interesting & different

It is to soon to get a healthy feel for the story to give a full final opinion as the story is still on going, but so far it is interesting, if a bit slow. The back and forth into the past and present is something i have never liked, but we'll see how it goes. PartWolf has never failed to enthrall me and make me laugh and cry with the characters so i look forward to seeing how this one progresses.

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Nice, csnt wait for the rest

Good story though characters needed fleshing out. We had no history for Rebecca for a few chapters and that made it confusing and next to nothing on Chase and the Uncle.

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Another Excellent story! Love all of it; the story and the writer's style. PartWolf brings you along with the characters emotions and paints a very vivid picture with words. I am on the edge of my seat with every chapter.

There are no words worthy enough to express my joy at seeing another PartWolf story come out. To read one of these stories is a feast for the imagination.

Adding more to my review because this is absolutely amazing! Through every story and every chapter of every story I've been feeling the emotions right along with the characters and for a story to bring me to tears of happiness and tears of sorrow there just are not enough words in our vocabulary to describe the talent of PartWolf.

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Hard to do a review in the middle

Cannot do a review until i finish the story.

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Too Short

Too short and a shy beta? As if...
Innocent and cute was portrayed well, however there was no plot nor much of a story at all. Telling readers that they dont have read the previous story is a shame as it seems those two characters have more life and energy than the tired lerthargic duo of this story.

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Hard read

Can definitely tell some one is into name dropping with the details of clothing, make-up and perfume. The very long paragraphs detailing how Violet applies her make-up and styles her hair along with what type and scents of bodywash, shampoo and conditioner definitely tell you where the writer's head us at. It is a lot of filler when readers want more details in other areas; nobody cares about brand of make-up or how Violet applies it to her eyes. This story isnt a "how to" on make-up nor a tutorial.
More meat and bones of information on the pack; details of what is going with and the mentions of rogues is more important than pages of clothing and make-up instruction

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It is an excellent read; have a box of tissues handy

Well done. You got me crying along with the characters and brought me with them through each emotion.

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A Very Good Read!

There are some gaps that need filling in like why they found Gia where she was and how she came to be there. The order of the story is misplaced. The plot is good, just not enough meat and bones. The story seems more sex and brute strength then reasoning of whi what why and where? Needs more.

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Worth a read

Some confusion in chapters and flipping back and forth definitely takes away from story as did the jumping back in time in the middle of it. Needs a bit of editing and proofing.

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A very loving romance with positive outcomes☺

The story is good for the soul. Finally a story that had a lot of positive moments moving forward.

On a side note just a bit of advice; get some outside help with proofing and editing. It was a great story!

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A Good Read

The story was interesting and had a good plot. I wish there had been more information; more to the story. When a reader wants more you know it is good. I also wished there had been more put into the catching of the traitors and consequences the Potentes faced. Some of the Order was taken care of, but what about the rest? Did anything that was done make a change? Would there be a change? Is there more to the story coming?

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Very Interesting

A good twist and interesting. They weren't animals, but genetically changed. I would have loved to see a bit more of the changes other then just Wolf's eyes changing color, but the explanations as she was the only test subject with that unique ability was figured in. It was good.

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Am In Love!

I am in love with this story already. It's got me on the edge of my seat awaiting each new chapter! Can't wait to see how this story plays out. I definitely recommend to everyone to read PartWolf's stories. You'll never regret it! The stories have had me hooked and I've followed them from one venue to another and here I am. Never want them to end!

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It's very scattered.

Needs editing. It's scattered. Needs work. Not sure why it got as many stars as it has. A demon with claws killed the people of a village and burned it and them to the ground then was hung. Not really a story that pulls nor says much. The what, why, where and who are not as fleshed out as they should be. To start a story with no real beginning is confusing.

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Captivating!

I want more!

lovely read and very entertaining, seriously fell in love with all the characters and the humor that you just can't help but laugh along with

very well done!

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Treasure by PartWolf

Love this story! PartWolf is an amazing writer and I am addicted! PartWolf's stories bring you along the adventure with each character. The emotions keep you riveted. You will laugh, cry, cringe, and yell right along side the character you will fall in love with while cheering them on!

If I could give a gold medal, a trophy or some type of prize for this story I would. Deserves more then 5 stars!

I hope this author continues to write and share their wonderful imagination and journey with us!

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Tell me there is more...?

Please don't let it end like this. I see this all the time where writers never finish stories and i had to really search to find this with a lot of chapters.

I love it and wish to read more, please?

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In love with your stories!

Excellent! Riveting! I loved everyone second of this story! I have been engrossed from beginning to end.
You've done such a wonderful job taking us along with all of the characters. I've shed tears, laughed and fist pumped the air on many occasions. Thank you for sharing with us! Please never stop writing! I am completely hooked!

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