Dangerously close to pedofile
I read through "Naming Ceremony" and couldn't go on in good conscious. I know this is fiction, but it is wrong in the male taking the 2 month old baby to bed with him. How did she know she was two? Why didn't he search through the car for items for the baby or possible identification of the mother to know the baby's last name. Didn't call emergency services to report it either.
Read the story now
It's just very creepy him being an adult . The fact that the story is basically told as if the writer is speaking stilted...broken and it just doesn't make any sense..
Please I urger writes to read your stories out loud to yourself and as well as a few friends. See if the sentence makes sense to you. Do the words flow properly as if spoken by an English person.
Your stories are being marketed and seen by an English speaking crowd. Try to google some of the words and see their meanings before entering them in a sentence. Does it make sense to use that word?
Lastly whether humans found the baby or wolves, instinct is making sure the baby is okay, fed, warm and finding her family if she has any relatives still alive and or family to watch over her. It is not okay in many cultures to take an infant or underage female to bed, even if just sleeping next to them, specially when that female if your infant mate. Very taboo.