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It was good

"Nice poem tbh it's kinda sad as well 🙁 , "

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The boy

"I love everything about it. I began reading this in the morning and i finished it already! I wanna keep reading it."

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Fucking brilliant!!!

"Fucking brilliant!!! That is so deep and puts a real message out there😘😉"

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Loneliness Depressing

"The words that I am going describe is "speechless". The author had made me speechless by this poem of sweet girl and boy of how they die in their own favourite way (like the boy liked swimming and the girl was common personality). It is true that once a suicide is started it never ends because it's the beginning of the ended of end ."

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