Interesting

"I will be frank and say I did not enjoy your written style. Though that does not mean someone else will just fall in love with it. So take my review with a grain of salt. The story itself without giving it away was compelling and the use of imagery therein was effective in capturing the moment. However at times the mood would be startled slightly by an ineffective use of dialogue or an odd sense of the narrator asking the reader a question. (or so that is what i felt like when i read) . The grammar and punctuation is correct for the majority of your work. However the spacing and structure seems off. I recommend using word to write your stories then transferring them to this sight to help alleviate the problem. I am aware that Inkitt has issues with converting formats resulting in odd spaces and removes punctuation's.. The story is good however and almost reminds me of a love craft venture. And for that you get 5/5 stars. The writing style 3/5. I hope you keep writing and coming up with more creative ideas! Cheers!"