Beyond the scars

"I strongly believe that the story deserves more attention. The author doesn't make obvious grammar mistakes and the story it's easy to read. I think it would be better if the story wasn't organized in chapters because it's very short, so it would be better to just put it as a short story. I liked a lot the story overall, it's short, but the message is important and clear. The story deserves to be read by more people!!"