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love

"i love all"

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Heart touching❤

"Very beautifully written. Love the simple and understandable style. Each chapter has its own beauty. I love how relatable every poem was."

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Awesome

"Overall I liked the poem, it's style of sync and especially the emotions."

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Poem

"I liked how I was able to relate to this so well but it also hit hime hard"

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It was really engaging, i could relate to it and feel it. It was amazing!

"I liked how I could relate to this piece of poetry. I felt like the writer really engaged me in every chapter. This poetry would be worth showing to my friends. I chose this rating because of it how this piece was done. It was done excellently. I am only fifteen(15) but, age is just a number. Keep up the good work! I absolutely loved it."

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Very wonderful piece of work. Am moved by the writer's unimaginable creative masterpiece.

"The way the writer was able to bring that feeling of a nature in it is world class."

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Poem of love

"I like the style of writing"

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Poetry about love and life

"It's my first time reading this. Its a new way to write poetry. I read everything all in one setting. So its so far so good. I have never read anything like this up until now."

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Awesome!

"It's all together with raw and easy to understand "

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Spectacular

"It was a really great piece. "

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Joy

" I reallly like this book I love eve about it I have no dislikes it as a lot of heart and soul this book is so great I love the vocabulary and the tone in by of the writer it really sets the mood of the story"

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Heart touching!

"There isn't a single thing which wasn't touching my heart! Words are so simple and sweet and meanings are so deep that I was compelled to cherish more and more of it!"

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Yes!!!

"I love it. Continue writing your story. It’s beautiful "

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Great thoughts, limited by words

"I truly enjoyed these sweet poems, The recipe of emotional pangs, complaints and sweet expectations of a lover is something you will love to relish again. My request to you is to use appropriate words and punctuation to pass on your message to your readers the way you want, not the way they may interpret. For example, in chapter 4, "your crazy lover of your first earning bracelet" should be written something like this, "crazy lover of your bracelet, from your first earning...". Similarly, we "extend" our hands, not "increase." I hope you will take my suggestion in a positive light. Keep writing your lovely poems."

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Wow

"Nice poetry. I love to read it."

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Love is everywhere! :)

"My only advice is being careful with both phrases and punctuation. Please also bookmark either www.grammarcheck.net or www.online-spellcheck.com. These two websites help me. :)"

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it’s good

"i really like this book i’ve just started and it’s pretty good "

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Not apt

"OK ok not so good "

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Poem about life and love

"Alittle fix with Grammar is needed"

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