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well done

"great job with this project. loved all the twists and turns. Had me going for a while before i realized marcus was a vampire. really enjoyed the story!"

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Lynne

"Took me wee while to connect with characters especially more than 2.good story tho.will read next book."

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Death and Disclosure :A London Mystery

"I did not comment on every character but the first four were a bit confusing before you introduced the Vampires. After that I had to go out and found it to be very enjoyable. Thank you "

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DEATH AND ENCLOSURE

"I like reading the storries writen by these writers, they keep me interrested all the time i was reading these books at home"

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Death and Disclosure - a London mystery

"Great plot, loved all the twists and turns....looking forward to a sequel"

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Vampire intriguing

"Love the story. Hope there will be more from the author "

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DEATH AND DISCLOSURE

"Didn't think I would like the story as I'm not into Vampire stories but I have to admit I throughly enjoyed it. Lots of twists and turns. Im ready for the next one!"

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Death and Disclosure - a London Mystery

"Loved it! I can't wait to read more!"

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I love it. It was a great story and the characters were amazing!

"I like everything about it thus far. I especially love the characters. I would recommend it to anyone,except I don't know anyone who reads like I do."

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This is so good

"This is an amazing story.i just can't stop reading it. "

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Death and disclosure a London mystery

"Really enjoyed this book. Refreshingly different. "

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Awesome read

"I wasn't sure I was going to like this, but once I started, I was hooked. Can't wait for the next volume. "

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Death and Disclosure

"I quite like detective novels and this was a very good one. The vampire element added a nice twist without becoming overpowering. "

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Death and Disclosure - A London Mystery

"Death and Disclosure is a fascinating story.. Perfect plot, very good twists, realistic characterization.. I will read more stories from this author.. She's fast becoming a favorite, and will buy her books if she had them printed"

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Shalini

"I am not a fan of vampire stories but I liked this book. The author's precise style makes it very interesting."

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Great

"Brilliant. Keeps you hooked till the end "

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Captivating storyline, full of suspense

"Great mix of detective story and mystery, novel characters that are likable as well as complex (though I feel that Naomi's character drops a bit to the background the more we learn about Paul and Marcus), witty lines, a captivating storyline that is full of suspence. Highly recommended to read – and good to know that there is more, so let's keep on going with the next mystery story about Paul Usher, Naomi and Marcus: Friends and Family!"

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Death and disclosure

"I just loved this book, good story line and the pace was also very clever, not to fast and then again not slow at all. Does Marcus never return ..pity though kind of like him around. "

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Is this the end??

"I’m done. I loved it but is there more??? Marcus needs a vampire love. I always figured living forever to be depressing. "

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Death and disclosure

"Loved the storyline, not usually into vampires, but this was an excellently crafted twist. The novel is very well written, with very good attention to punctuation and grammar, all in all the most professionally written book I have read on inkitt, "

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