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Wow!!! Great work author!!!

"Hope you'll make more of these plot twisting stories!! Maybe you'll be the next Stephen King!! And I do hope you won't stick to one genre but be able to make others too!! Keep it up author and your team(if you do have any) Since your work have minimum grammar error/s I assume you do have editors with you which is a very good thing by the way!!! I do recommend this to ALL sorts of readers !! I love it!!!! Though I've got to say it's sort of sad how Avita turns out!! Wonder how her sister would react?? Anyway, great job!!! "

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The Grin

"Amazing book from beginning to end loved it So much "

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The grin

"Im.very upset because I have to go to another place to finish. I wish I would have known. The other site want s you to pay. Which sucks because this Is a very good book but definitely not paying to read. Hopefully you finish it on here one day"

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This novel is amazing, I haven't quite yet finished it but I am close, I am so upset that it is nearly finished. I love this so much and u deserve all the credit

"I loved the entire plot and there were so many plot twists:michelle was killed, oriah is Chris's son and so much more. Your style of writing is incredible, and u have such an imagination to write something like this. I haven't quite yet finished but I'm gonna be so upset when I have. I just want u to know that u r so skilled in writing and have such a talent for story writing and coming up with plots"

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The story is powerful, I like how it was presented. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]

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Loved it

"Everything about this book is just so good. I read it a while back and missed it, so I came back and realized I never wrote a review... I suppose it's better late than never. I was seriously in love with this book since chapter 1 and I've already reccomended it to all of my friends lol, so it's only fair that I reccomend it to you who is here in the review section to see if the story is worthy your time. Believe me, it is. And you will definetly not regret your decision! "

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The grin

"Well first of all thanks a million for taking me on an amazing journey. This novel was amazing, i am dumbfounded totally. This is too scary and dark. I would recommend it, to the people who like dark stuff. It was perfect! This proved to be among the best novels i have ever read on inkitt. "

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The Grin

"Bro, if you like dark, twisted demented stories with hella gore. This is for you. I don't recommend this before going to bed in a pitch black room. 🕴"

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Great i love it ❤️❤️

"Amazing best I've read so far"

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Creepy

"Don't want to continue reading but also can't stop reading "

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The grin

"The story is so dark and twisted. It has an unpredictable plot with very vivid descriptions of the murders and excellent portraying of characters. It has all the elements to keep one hanging till the very end and even make them want for more. It is an excellent book for all those who like such a genre. Well written and Great job author 👏 "

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I love this book its my favourite

"I like this book becouse its very sweet I would recamend it to evrybody its soooooo GOOD I WOULD RATE IT OUT OF 10/10. OR 10000/10000 "

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Loved the plot

"Excellent story"

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The grin

"I love it I was terrified. So awesome "

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The grin

"OMG! This was soooo scary and the detail of each murder was sooo fantastically explained ,it was as if happening in front of me. Super plot and super scary. "

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Just but reviewing

"This novel is lit and when anyone reads it, they can capture the scenarios.....which is quiet amazing.....it has also taught me some things.....you did a good work writing this book....the best thing is that it was fluent and short but not too short....and that was an amazing job....KEEP UP!!!✨"

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Great Read

"I liked the way the story moved quickly but left you wondering about so many things. How sweet and innocent the child appeared to be. The plot and everything in between just fell into place. There were a few errors along the way that can be quickly fixed. I must say there were no boring moments and the ending was perfect. It would be nice to see you continue story line with the child being raised by foster parents. So dark and well written. Great job!"

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Th psychic

"Day 3 had the same content as day 2 , hence Michelle's parents death remains a mystery to us..."

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The Grin

"This story was just great !!! I read ALOT and this is unlike ANYTHING I’ve ever read. I’m hoping to find more that you’ve written after I send this. Stay Blessed"

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Thrilling

"Soooooooo goood"

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