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"Loved it can't wait for the next one"

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Awesome!!!

"How are there not more reviews for this story. This is wonderful. I recommend to everyone. If ya like a little romance, some danger and suspense it all right here:)"

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"Wow! Great book! Really loved the storyline, the characters... everything was so awesome and on point! If you decide to write a Part 2, I would totally stick around for that! Great job❤️. "

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"The story is well written, and keeps a good pace. Left enough room for a sequel is the author ever decided too write one. Definitely recommend"

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"Great Book! I enjoyed reading this very much. Great plotline with likeable characters. I look forward to reading the next book you write."

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Great Book!

"I enjoyed reading every word of this story and the flow of it! Clara is such a heroic character and that her twin sister would be sort of the villain of the piece. It was also a good idea having so many of the characters working with her to have magic in a kingdom were magic is outlawed. It's like a very big twist on The Prince and the Pauper but with more and a possible sequel. That being said, one thing I would suggest is having Clara use her magical abilities more. I feel like everyone else was using theirs and she wasn't after she ended up in the castle. Maybe in the second book, if there is one, have Clara dive more into her own magic. Overall, a very good story."

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"I will start off by saying I really liked the plot of this story, however it was really slow going to start with. Several times I was thinking about giving up on this book as it is so slow going to start with and the main character is stupidly trusting. Once I got to about chapter 7 I started to enjoy this book a bit more and decided to finish the book. Having said all that I do hope the author writes a second book as there is still a huge amount not figured out. "

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