What is your opinion?
His wolf
"This seems like His wolf is going to be a very good book! I'm very excited to get to the end of the book to see what happens to Bella and Angel! Is that really her alpha? Do they go to war? Does she meet the pack?"
His Mate
"Good start to your story! You create a very intimate feel from the beginning that is really great. Make sure that your verb tenses are all the same. Two helpful tool for catching typos are Grammarly, or Google Translate. For Google, just copy your story into one side and have it read it back to you. I find it helpful because it helps you hear how your story will sound outside of your head. It will enable you to improve flow and catch mistakes that you wouldn't notice otherwise. This story has great potential! Keep up the good work!"
His mate
"I feel like its a good story that beeds some more editing but ill continue reading"
A good start
"Hi! You have a good start to the story here. However, there is very little so far to comment on the plot. I will come back for another review when there's more. Going forward, I would just suggest to keep a close eye on the grammar and punctuation."
