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Fix grammar, but great story
"You missed some commas, other than that, Very good use of show don't tell! I like the hook you used. Even if the story does get slow, people will want to read further to get to that part. The title is a little misleading: I thought it would be about the Gods entering the modern age, or something like that. Maybe just change the title. Good job!"
REVIEW TIME!!!
"I DON'T CARE IF THEY DO THIS FOR A LIVING, NEVER GO TOWARDS THE SCARY SOUND, AND NEVER EVER TAKE A MAN WHO'S AFRAID OF HEIGHTS SOMEWHERE WERE HE HAS TO DEAL WITH HEIGHTS. I do like this story, though, it's interesting and I would really like to see this story continues."
