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Left Wanting More

"The best part about the story was how it kept surprising at various junctures. I really loved the characters Lizzie, Vincent and Sven. Definitely Geo, and the twist at the end was a pleasant one. The only issue I had with the story was that it was a little slow at points. I felt the story could have been longer or more action-packed. "

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Beautiful language

"I am in love with the language used in the story. It's so descriptive. It's easy to tell where the character(s) is and what they are seeing and smelling. The plot was alittle confusing. It was hard to know what was going on at first. This is true in some other areas as well. I also liked the consistency of the setting and how there were certain scarcities based on the environment like fish. "

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