That was a pretty good continuation of the previous 'Roy' story. You must have been able to make this because the previous author permitted you too. So lots of thanks to him. And obviously to you for writing it! The plot actually appealed to me because I believe in the ''two sides to every coin' principle.
Also, do you like dinosaurs? I amwriting a dinosaur scifi at inkitt, Semisaurs: The Chosen Generation.