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Superb story

"Superb story. Thoroughly enjoyed it!"

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Proposed In Kindergarten

"Loved it 🧡💛. Ayaan and Zuby are love ❤."

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Good

"I liked the pace and ending also "

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So good a novel

"I like the fact that novel is good and nice... Its mild yet addictive "

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Interesting to read the story liked it

"Good book to read the story liked "

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I love your story writing skills.. and the book is super awesome♥️🥰

"Your story writing skills are super awesome.. I love the story. You describe is very well♥️🥰"

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Proposal at kindergarten

"Its good.to.read..but the plot is very slow "

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Amazing story

"I just loved it..."

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So touchy story

"I just love the concept of childhood love.... Plus Ayaan is so romantic... I really love the chemistry of Ayaan and his ladylove and his sister in law Sagu is also so supportive character that I like the most after Ayaan and Zuby.. ❤️"

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Proposed In Kindergarten

"Great story...... I enjoyed reading it..... Nice plot.......writer has done really good job ....amazing "

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So much sweet!

"How the author create the story is cool~ I am in awe and happy for everything. It was perfect and all. Now I wish that there's also someone that the Almighty has planned on giving to me someday hahaha Really sweet. Kudos to the author 🙌"

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Good job

"Nice story "

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proposed in kindergarten

"lovely and God always answer prayers to those who are pure in hearts desire!!!"

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Proposed in kindergarten

"Love this book for it made me cry and rejoice in all that Zuby has accomplished Zuby has gone through a lot of hardships due to her Aunt and uncle and their son but she survived and over and over came it 😍 all and married Ayaan a good loving man that is doing anything to make happy he over steps and don't explains sometimes which causes some heart aches but he makes up for it just love it 😍 ( for it shows some real life situations and problems )💞"

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Syeda Lubna

"I feel like reading more & more. Wonderful story Hats off, keep on posting 💐"

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Awesome

"Love reading romantic novels... Flawless work... Keep writing."

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Liked it

"Its a nice sweet puppy love..I m enjoying reading it"

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Okay

" It's good one buy little grammar mistakes but nice "

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Love story

"This is a good read for lovers of romance. Its pace is a little slow for my liking and because you show everything for all points of view. This can make it a little repetitive. Your characters were likable and their love from such an early age is rare. I urge this writer to keep up the good work."

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Fairly gd

"A lot needs to be done to make it more enticing to read, it is so repetitive and too narrative😫"

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