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Fiery 🔥

"I feel like too much was drawn out at times. Often, the conversion between the 2 MC just repeated in circles. I did enjoy the detailing and inner turmoils. Loved it, thank you! "

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It's a beautiful storyline

"I like the storyline, but I got confused with Walt's initial crime. You didn't specify who did it afterall, so it was a bit confusing. It is a great story indeed."

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A Feast of Consequences

"Brilliant. One of the most engrossing stories I've ever read. It kept me wanting more through the entire book. Their love for each other was as combustible as the forest. Too many lives were headed for disaster, and instead of coming to a crashing halt, low and behold, a happy ending. Terrific writing. Can't wait to read more by this author. I only wonder why this isn't a published book. I would buy it."

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Finding love in the face of death

"Well written with believable characters as with all your stories, thanks for another great read"

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Excelente

"This book was very creative way different from what I have read great job. definitely recommend"

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A feast of consequences

"Really interesting and full of anticipation "

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A Feast Of Conscience

"I want to change my review. I am reading Walter and Denise's thoughts and actions from the Past, Present and Future all in the same time. John's writing and attention to detail is amazing. I think I have whiplash taking it all in. This story will use every sense you have. Brilliant! "

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A Feast of Consequences

"Absolutely BRILLIANT!!!! Why this book isn't a best seller or hasn't won a dozen (or more) awards boggles the mind! Filled with twists and turns to keep us on our toes, so that we have to carry on reading! So few typos, and a fantastic writing style makes this author one of the best - if not THE best - on this platform. I will recommend this story to all my friends and family and can't wait to get stuck into more of this author's wonderful work."

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Amazing story

"This book will capture you from the first chapter and hold you until the very end. Action packed. Romantic. Intriguing. A beautiful story done under a talented author. Highly recommended. "

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A feast of Consequences

"Quiet a unique novel I was hooked from the very beginning enjoy every bit of the mystery it brings "

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Feast of Consequences A Review

"A very compelling read. Brilliant bit of storytelling, A mystery that had roller coaster twists and turns that baffled and put one on pins and needles till the excellent ending. This does not disappoint. An rather witty title also. "

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The story was amazing, l enjoyed it especially the sense of humour. It's well written

"I loved it, best story ever. You are an amazing writer, lm looking forward to reading most of books "

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A feast of consequences

"I loved the plot very much. The way Walt was so calm but calculating. And also the way the writer explained the whole everything. So intense! I'm definitely recommending this to my friends. Looking forward to reading more of your books❤️"

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Good

"Very intriguing, could not put this down!"

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A Feast 9f Consequences

"This is the 2nd book I've read from this author and wow, it did not disappoint! I'm probably repeating myself but I love the writing style; it sucks you right into the story! Such a talented writer!"

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If you want to read a story that should be on the best seller list, here you go!

"This story had me on an emotional rollercoaster ride in a phenomenal way!! I couldn't put it down! I can't understand why this gem is hidden. It should be up there with all the others that inkitt suggest for anyone who dont know what to read next! Or for people who love emotional rollercoasters! I was on the edge of my seat over and over, i was sick to my stomach a few times, i was awwwww that so sweet, and oh that was crazy......oh all over the place. You will never regret reading this one! I wish he would publish on Amazon. It would sell out quickly! "

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A Feast of consequences

"I absolutely love the story and the plot, it's a page turner for sure. Will defenately recommend it to friends. "

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A feast of consequences

"Absolutely loved this book. Love your writing style. Was able to visualize Denise & Walt very well. This would actually be a very good movie. Really liked Carl immensely, the perfect protective brother. Great ending for everyone concerned. "

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Like a movie.

"From start to finish, details made reading this akin to watching it. Among the comments, someone said you've put in details like in a movie and said it was unnecessary. For me, that made reading you enjoyable. Who needs films when authors are like you? The story was action packed and I loved how it all turned out in the end for Walt and Denise. I was worried that they had to elope in the end.. I love the warm scenes. Subtle eroticism at its best. I really hope that there's going to be a sequel.. In the meantime, I'd busy myself with your other books. Thanks for being such a great storyteller!"

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Woooowwwww!

"No words can explain how this story had me on edge.....i TOTALLY enjoyed this.....I need to find me a Walter Peterson 😂😉.....but seriously FANTASTIC job....now I can put down my phone and go do some house chores 😆"

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