Wolf pack

"Where is the rest of the story?"

Wolf pack, I love the novel so much

"The novel is so interesting, I love wolf stories and really enjoy the sex side but it will be nice if you work more on the grammar."

Wolf Pack

"To be honest the story is really good it has a great plot the only thing I don't like about it is the grammar, it can use some more work one that part."

Amazing

"your story is amazing but I do have some issues with the grammar but you can always go back and edit it also i have a question on Mika, why does kikya hate her, I apologise if I spelt her name wrong"

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Needs work, but great potential!

"I am enjoying the story line, though I wish there was a little more depth. I find that the events often read kinda like a list that's being read off (this, then that, then that, then that, then finally this) with not enough detail or back story to make each scene or event feel more alive and real. They should be more colorful and deep to allow you to full emerse yourself and get lost in the store as if you were really there. Also, it could use some editing. I am often finding myself having to use my own deductive reasoning to figure out what word is meant to be used. The story line and plot are fun I think though, great potential."

Review

"I overall loved the story! It had some great points and a good look on each of the character's true colours. Grammer was a little tough. Like with quotations marks you have to add punctuation before you write. "Like this." Said me. And when you ment to say I'm but a typo or autocorrect would change it to Am. Over all I like the story very well. Are you going to continue it at all? I love it and it'll be interesting with the drama in the story! Hope you have a wonderful day/night/life! -Darkflame"

Cliff-hanger

"I really got into this story, finishing it in less then ten mins. Yet I wanted to throw my computer when I finished. Why? Because of where the story ended. Overall it was great, except some of the grammar. Plus am was used instead of i'm"

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"well, this story wasn't my favorite, while there is suspense that i hope gets resolved, the main reason i don't like it is because of the grammar. For example, when you want to use the word, 'I'm', you end up using the word 'am', which in my book, is not correct. The plot is very well thought out, while there are some confusing parts in the story, I found that it is very detailed, but at times, you seemed to skip ahead in a lot of parts that you could've elaborated on. Now, ok, there are some very heated scenes in this, mainly the last ones[Chapters]. For many, this is basically porn, but it's not. For me, and probably lots of others, this is perfectly fine, it's not like there's pics or anything dirty like that. Anyway, this story in general is ok, I would recommend it to some of my friends but only some. I don't know if you're 10 and you randomly know all the parts on the body but this is very odd, you skip a lot, seem to get into the heated scenes way too much, and make this story go different ways very quickly. But otherwise, continue making stories like this."

Review

"I like stories that have original plots, not ones that are used again and again until we tire of them. i believe that your story is one of those that are quite original and deserve to be read. i liked it. keep on the good work."

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