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Axel and Adel

"Beautiful love story comparable to The Hobbit or even better. This story can make a Hollywood Blockbuster! Congratulations dear author! More power to you!!! 100 stars are not enough!🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟"

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challenging fate

"good storyline and plot just needs a few tweaks on the story herr in there but overall it's worth it"

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👍👏👏😊nice

"Interesting "

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Simply amazing

"I’ll just say all your stories are beautiful and amazing worth reading ♥️"

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Bloody great 👌

"Love it really good laid out story cant wait for the end."

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Challenging Fate

"The plot of the book is very interesting . I love it from a 1st persons point of view , though I would like to see some of Axel’s thoughts ."

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Awesome

"Awesome 👏 story 💕"

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Interesting story!

"The story is great! There are typos and missing words from time to time, but the author has a great eye for detail. I am excited to finish and read more from this author. "

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Challenging fate

"Really good!! A few spelling errors and grammar errors. But, it was addictive and I personally can't wait for another book written by you."

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Challenging Fate

"A great read. I loved all the highs and lows. How each character feeds off each other. Great job!"

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Pretty good

"I enjoy the story, has a lot of plots, but I've expected more of them. The details are good, i would just expected more from The description of characters. Anyway, i look forward to read any novel you may write"

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Love it!❤

"It's so good! Love the plotlines and the background of the characters. I love how the author can relate the charaters to real life scenarios. Some minor spelling errorsbut overall great book.😁👍"

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You will regret it if you don't read this story

"I totally recommend reading this story! It's so not cliché and won't get you bored in fact you won't be satisfied until you finish it all in one go without interruptions. So glad I found it and you would be glad too once you read it."

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Challenging Fate

"You will love it 10/10 I PROMISE "

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Challenging Fate

"Love this story ..hate that it ended any more to the story to come??? "

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Interesting!

"The story is interesting! I can't wait for more! The author writes very well, it hook me to the story and the words chosen by tge author fits every part of the book. Keep up the good work author-nim!"

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Review

"Great start, though a bit choppy in the second chapter. There was also a punctuation issue in the flashback. Other than that a strong story."

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OMG

"This book is amazing. It's hard to not read until the end because it's so good. You are doing great. From what I saw you didn't mess up on anything. I'm new to all of this so you may want to get a few more opinions. I can't wait to read more of your books. Thank you so much for being a great writer."

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Nice story

"Nicely written..emotions are captured perfectly ."

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Mona

"Liked this story very much! ❤️"

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