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I have just started love the plot but I don't like that that the chapters are so short
"Short chapters"
Nice storyline
"I like the way the story goes .... And as I said it's a good start for me reading this on inkitt as a first story . "
Cool story line
"Very good story line. I love the way the story is told. The plot is good too. But there are a lot of plot holes. Nothing you can't fix with a little editing. The grammar is good but there are a few. Punctuation mistakes. You are very talented and your creativity is very bright. The story is very good but even the best stories has room for improvement. The book is going to stay in my reading list because I love it. Good luck author"
