What is your opinion?
Interesting Love
"Quite a way to begin a love story. Not a usual or normal one. Promising."
Awesome!
"I love this story so much! You never cease to amaze me gurl! I love that you start them out by them just tolerating each other, because most story's I read are either corny and cheesy, and they keep bumping into each other or they make goggly eyes at each other. But this story is different, they just tolerate, then they become friends, and then she questions herself if she loves him, and I love that about your characters! Also, your chapter titles are the best, they are so funny! Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to reading more!!"
Good start
"I loved the prologue. That one sentence intrigued me, as it immediately gave the narrator's voice a tone, an underlying emotion. I liked that you went back in time to before the wedding in chapter 1 - however you told too much. I would suggest you try showing instead of telling - although it can be difficult and it's normal not to do it at the start of your writing journey. However, instead of telling us that Chloe and her sister are the MC's twins, show us the girls watching the MC and have the MC notice just how similar they are to her. Show us the relations between people with dialogue - and try not to start the chapter with what some people call an "info block" - a paragraph full of information. In your story, the information was easily absorbed, however I would still suggest changing it into a scene, where the information is shown. This will also make the story more intriguing, pulling the reader in further after the well-chosen sentence in the prologue. Overall, well done! This story has a lot of potential, with a good plot and nice characters. Keep going!"
