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Rites of passage

"I love this story so far. Do you know when there will be more? I'm dying to see what happens next.. Story line is great abd love the relationships going on around her. "

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It's quite interesting already.

"I like everything in the book so far. I always wanted to read a book about Renesmee and jacob.The plot of the story is just simple and wonderful. I was just wondering when the updates will be made cuz it has left me hanging!!!"

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Loved the Internal Struggle

"I really want to see what happens later on because I thought it was very interesting. I liked seeing the internal struggle Renesmee was having with her feelings about Jacob. That's how I would've pictured it."

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