What is your opinion?
Somebody to Love
"I thought that the main idea or point you were trying to get across was very clear and realistic and that it was, altogether, a pretty good start for the main story and how it would later progress. I saw some grammatical errors as well as a lot of hold in your writing style that, I’m sure, you will easily be able to fix once you are a little more experienced. The plot was fairly interesting, but I would recommend in the future to try and be a lot more descriptive and narrative with your characters conversation and how you phrase specific wording that can cause the reader to gasp. But other than that, this story has a lot of potential."
PROMISING
"Seeing as only the prologue is up, i don't have much to say but i do want to read the book and see where it goes. So i will come back and give another review after a few more chapters."
