What is your opinion?
Extremely good read
"Brilliant plot and a great storyline, the characters were well written and enjoyable with great dialogue and descriptions. I found this to be a very original and intriguing idea for a tale ! "
Excellent!
"I couldn't put my laptop down. This is amazing. I love the concept, and Dean's voice is wonderful. You've created a narrative that is simultaneously intriguing yet captures the concision of a down-to-earth character who actually emulates a human being unlike many popular novels, The primary interrogative of, ''Why did I disappear?' is fantastic - it hooked me from the first word. Can't wait to read more (who needs to sleep when you have this?!)"
Overall, great plot
"First of all, the story, the plot, is unique, for me at least. I like how it clearly advocates the acceptance of the LGBTQ+ community, that yes, it is NOT a disease and I totally agree with it. Although, in the story, it is kinda off to me how the conversations go straight to what is needed to be said; I mean, I thought it would be nice if there are some pauses to emphasize the emotions felt by one compared to the other, or something like that. But overall, the story is good, the reality of it all is great and I just want to say everybody needs an Elise to their lives haha 💚 well done 🙏"
Great work
"Despite the use of simple language to put forward such a genre, the concept was fresh. The character development is also comparatively different from what I've read up till now. I somehow found a Jason Bourne vibe with this personally. There are a few punctuation errors here and there, but it is not thrown to the reader's eyes, so you're fine. I want to get back to this soon!"
