Painful Death by Tae_my_bae at Inkitt
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Painful Death

Summary

"Is it painful to die?"

Status
Complete
Chapters
8
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

#Namjoon#

It was another awful day. I filled the petrol of the last car. The customer was way too rude. He threw the money outside. It fell on the road as I picked them up. By now the car had left. A lot of customers treat me like this. Almost everyone.

I went to the counter. I didn’t earn a decent earn today but it was enough.

I checked out and started to walk along the footpath. It’s been 6 months since she left. I know she’ll never come back. Why did she left me? Why did she take all the pain? Is it dreadful to go through the fact that you’ll disappear and never come back?

My thoughts came to an end when I realized that I was walking along the dark side of the area. I saw some thugs smoking cigarettes. I lowered my head and tried to avoid them, walking past them. But one of them stopped me.

“Hey!!Got any cash on you?“. One of them stumbled towards me. I tried to run away but it was too late.

“We asked politely and you’re trying to run away” one of them scoffed.

“Face the consequences”. Another one muttered as a sharp pain ran through me.

“YOU STABBED HIM” one of them yelled to the other.

“I’m sorry I didn’t mean to” “Forget it,let’s run”

They took every thing from me and ran away. Typical.

My body numbed with pain. So this is what she felt like.

Everything was blur until my visions turned black.












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