What is your opinion?
Yes I’m bias but it’s awesome anyways! 💜
"I love the story obviously because we are working on this universe together. The tips for you and any writer in general is just write the story out. Get the words on the paper and then go back and fix your mistakes."
Good First Person Narration
"I can feel how the character is submerged to the story of the adult. Anyway, as I read I did skipped some scenes. But your narration is good. And the story seems interesting. In chapter 1: via ctrl,+F aka "find words" type this "itself I the" -Hearm Jan"
Very nice and still okay novel!
"I like the novel and it is written so well that I could understand it. Although I have to read it twice but now I understand the novel. Nice, obviously amazing and good. I think it is actually written for kids? When I read the full novel, I tell it to my younger sister and she just like it! She like so much that she tell me to tell the story every day! "
Such a nice and intresting book
"Good book to read, loved the gener and plot. "
