Dalila Alvizo

California

Hi I'm Dalila, I mainly write erotica romance, fiction, horror, and supernatural. Enjoy my stories and leave me a review of your thoughts. Also, if you can donate however much you’d like.

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Steamy and Sexy

Hot and dirty fun stories that any adult can enjoy 😉

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Yes I’m bias but it’s awesome anyways! 💜

I love the story obviously because we are working on this universe together. The tips for you and any writer in general is just write the story out. Get the words on the paper and then go back and fix your mistakes.

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Too cliche

This story is okay for something that could have possibly be a first time writing. I think you need to work on finding a unique writing style. There are grammar mistakes that are very noticeable. The story overall is very cliche and simply basic. From the first chapter, I wasn’t hooked in. It was typical, I think this story could have been written more adults than teenagers. And I also suggest using Grammarly to fix mistakes. Otherwise, this book could be a better potential with a different outlook of characters and description wise.

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